Wikiality:Sound Advice/Archive/February 2007

Author's Comments
I feel like I've gotten a good start, but I need some more help. Fundamental Christianity.

Suggestions

 * Very sound fundamental foundation, ha! I made a joke! Excuse me, you start with a short succinct opening, and then fill in every section with one short sentence. Try to expand each section by answering the heathen questions all reporters ask: who, what, where, when and why.


 * For instance: The "History" section currently says:"'When Jesus went to heaven, he told his followers to let snakes bite them, dance around, and to speak in 'tongues'. He told the women to wear their hair long, wear long dresses, and to not wear makeup. These truthy Christians are now known as Pentecostals.'"Now, see if that information answers any of the 5 questions:
 * who started Fundamental Christianity?
 * what is it?
 * where did it start?
 * when did it start?
 * and why did it start?


 * Try to do that for each section. It doesn't have to be some long, drawn-out thing, just make sure there is enough information that it doesn't look empty.


 * Remember, this is an online encyclopedia that some child may read for a book report, you can never assume the poor child knows this (even though we are obviously all Christians and have Accepted The Lord Jesus Christ As Our Personal Lord and Savior) we might get a few lazy liberals wandering in here who don't know Jesus and your page may save their souls even as they flunk out of school!--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 22:12, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

Author's Comments
I'm trying to provide a counterpart for the Chicago Bears entry, but am having trouble giving Dr. Colbert his proper due.

Suggestions

 * I added a few sections. You can fill them in, or make up your own, but the page desperately needs some heft. Just remember to review the Common Mistakes Beginners Make page on how to avoid wikipedophilia.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 20:50, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

Suggestions
Nice pic, but w-a-a-y too random. Please check out the Common Mistakes Beginners Make page first, please.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 20:42, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

Author's Comments
Can an admin add Fozzie to the bearology.
 * Please review the Common Mistakes Beginners Make page and make changes first.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 19:11, 2 February 2007 (UTC)