Wikiality:Sound Advice

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February, 2007 Wikinazi and Jew Testament/The Law were both featured during the month of February, congratulations to the citizens whose guts produced such fine work.

March, 2007 So far, Gitmo North is the only page to be Featured, but there is a whole month to go, so get your pages up here and on to the voting page!

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=Week of 3/11/07 (I go by Sundays)=

Posted By
User:Tourskin

Author's comments
It needs more images and more truthiness.

Michael Moore
Just because I want to know what you guys think of the new and improved page. --Demonseed 20:14, 12 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Well, I think it gets the point across. --Alethic Logic 22:15, 12 March 2007 (UTC)

Easter
Released just in time for spring break, it's Easter. --Alethic Logic 00:34, 12 March 2007 (UTC)

Suggestions for Easter
It seems to be in 3 seperate parts...
 * Part 1: is the "how it's celebrated/not celebrated" section
 * Part 2: is the story of easter section
 * Part 3: trivia section

I say this because none of the sections seems to "flow" into any of the others. Maybe a line or two at the end of each section to sorta introduce, or "segue" into the next section.

Also, you mentioned spring break, why not put a little Girls Gone Wild ref in the "How Americans Celebrate It"??? Otherwise it looks good.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 20:50, 12 March 2007 (UTC)

=Week of 2/25/2007=

Posted By
User:No1likesme

Author's Comments
Timmy does not take criticism well.

Suggestions for "Timmy"
It seems this page is random, why should this page stay? Is there some explanation for why it is on this site?--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 07:00, 1 March 2007 (UTC)

I don't "get it" either. My gut says we need to feed Timmy to the bears. --Alethic Logic 15:31, 1 March 2007 (UTC)

I suggest moving this to your userpage. It's not all bad; I like the idea and the pic, but I have no clue who Timmy the squirrel is. If you are introducing something that hasn't been mentioned by Colbert, it needs to be of the highest quality and in line with the Colbert Experience. Also, if you want it to be read by Stephen, try posting it to Integrity Justice.--MC Esteban 20:40, 1 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Apparently "Timmy" refers to this (where's the yawn icon). --Alethic Logic 22:23, 1 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Fair enough, but where does it say any of that on this article? If this page is supposed to be about the alleged "kidnapping" it doesn't do that.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 20:27, 4 March 2007 (UTC)


 * I think it's pretty much some 14-year-old hoping someone will pick up on the theme he's created. Basically randomness in my view.  I don't see it going anywhere or belonging here.  And I don't intend to be too critical - the author definitely has some creativity, but I don't see the relevance here. --Alethic Logic 20:39, 4 March 2007 (UTC)

Posted By
User:Aaronak

Author's Comments
I was asked to submit this article for some Sound Advice, which I'm always willing to accept.

Suggestions for Pyramid
Nice overall, a lot of info: you cover the different types of pyramids that there are...but...in your introduction, you stated that, "pyramids have been the subject of much myth and speculation". Then without telling us what those myths are or what the speculations have been, you jump right to describing the different types there are.

Please put something in your article about the myths and speculations; don't tease your readers, we now need to know about pyramid myths and speculation...--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 04:02, 1 March 2007 (UTC)

=Week of 2/18/07=

Land Lion
I most humbly submit my first effort at adding much-needed Truthiness to the Wild Wild World of Web. WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer told me about this peer review thing, so rest assured that if your criticism crushes my spirit, I'll only blame him/her.
 * I hope I also get credit if this thing gets a Pulitzer.--WatchTVEatDonutDrinkBeer 02:52, 26 February 2007 (UTC)
 * I'm sure I could drop your name during my acceptance speech, though obviously the bulk of the speech will involve giving Stephen his due recognition for inspiring my work. --Penh 00:32, 27 February 2007 (UTC)